Ayo i smell a liquid in this XD

Cool animation tho

I love this so much...really cool vibe, love how you thought out the mission, really nice :D

The part at 1:09 feels a bit too empty adding a bit more sorrow(some sad pads or piano or maybe some more scary dissonance) to it could make it more impactful.

Sound wise i feel like the bass could be a little quieter(or maybe distorted less) cause it clips a bit, turning those parts of the song into some noise mush.

Also if you will work on this even further and would like to get more feedback you can join the discord server mentioned in VGMC thread.

Oh boy, i like this piece, but sadly im not sure i can really count it since its not about the mission given to the musician in my story.

The goal is to make a song based on the upcoming mission to destroy the main energy source of Bastion. So i guess you will have to either rearrange or make a new one.

Anyway for this, the intro really has that kinda videogame-y vibe to it and it feels like you are in a lobby(the ship) where you accept quests and go on various missions.

I think the song already has basically everything it needs to tell the story its about maybe adding some sort of variation into the second drop might make it feel like you reached your maximum speed and all the stars around you just move in that typical movie warp scene XD

at 3:11 it starts to clip... which happens to me too, often XD maybe lowering the sub? or sidechaining the sub might make it better and less muddy.

As i said the song is really nice but i cant count it cause its not about the mission.

Quality stuff here, love it.

this is genius

this looks really cool.

This is so cool.......my favorite legend from Apex XD good job.