Oh boy im gonna sound like the weirdest guy out here XD
From technical standpoint, this is perfect the mixing, mastering, sound design and faithfullness to the genre is awesome.
And for me personally thats the biggest flaw...i just am not that impressed by clean, loud mix or these kinds of bass sound designs.
It all just sounds the same to me, it feels like i just heard a song that i heard 1000 times before and the most creative and unique thing here is the part at 0:22-1:59 where the formula concept is...and even then it still feels like it was there almost from the beginning of colour bass or dubstep.
I guess the calm parts were 3manon's work. Both of you did your parts awesomely.
The sheer devastating quality of mixing and sound design magic from Quintivium and awesome atmos work from 3manon makes up for absolutely killing entry in this round.
I just hope there was more of both of your personalities in them choruses.
Please take this as purely personal preference :D